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Dew glistened in morning dust of light;
When frozen laughter of stars cease, you would sight
Just barely cross pavements shrouded dark, the sundial.
Morning: veils, roses rally rampant for the Festival. Kites

Loom across on cerulean seas. For miles,
Pilgrims sailed on barges down the blue Nile.
Though it did not matter much to the queen's
Eyes fixed round the ebbing tide of men round the sundial.

Nothing, she said. Gaze at your reflection. Lean
In. How long should the craggy mosaic be green
At them, couples fresh and pink and peaches white,
When by her side was her pharaoh in his stone bed so keen?

Dew glistened in the mourning dusk of light.
Due it was, that sands would cover tombs in their plight.
Though, you can see just barely that sundial still
Mourning, and star spangled veils rose rampant to its flight.

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DFC Day 20

The interlocking rubiyat. rhyme scheme

aaba, bbcb, ccac, aaea

Disappointed how this didn't have a meter. Response to prompt 'where will you go?'

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:iconchewyraezen:
just beautiful. so beautiful! :)
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:iconreflectionsinwater:
~reflectionsinwater Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :heart: :hug:
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